choose it Narrative part one

one day under the flying car’s Gerald and his little brother James were going to the stores to get their parents bread milk and a drink. Gerald and James were walking down the road when James saw something shiny in the alleyway behind the fence james told gerald but he said “we’ll check if its still there when we get back” they bought the things and walked the same way “IT’S STILL THERE” james shouted he ran down the alleyway and jumped the fence “don’t do that again if i lose you mum & dad will kill me” Gearld said out of breath james was amazed “IT'S A STAR IT”S A STAR WE FOUND A STARRRRRRR. “Keep it down it's probably just plastic ” gerald touched it “OWW it just burnt me” gerald said. Then he said something and it really happened. “I wish this star wasn't so hot” james shouted “ i want to touch it” gerald said no but james didn't listen then he held it and he wasn't burning his hand.

They walked home after putting it in their bag, after getting home, they went home and went into the garage and pulled out the star Gerald wonders why it stop burning then james said “I wish we had a bag of chips and a big drink” it appeared then Gerald said “let's dig a hole and put it in the backyard it's bad wishing for things that we need but we cant let people know we have this as well, James didn't want to but then during the night Gerald snuck out and rode his bike far away and dug a hole then buried it the next morning came around and James was sad he didn't talk to anyone. Gerald went back to get the star but instead he found thousands of clouds going up he dug up the star and got it the clouds disappeared and he wished them back he got James and showed him the clouds. They climbed up the clouds james tried eating the clouds he couldn't but when they got near space they couldn't breath so gerald quiqly wished to be able to breathe any wear. 

German folk dancing

most days after lunch we go to different room to learn new cutler dance's  in room 1 we learned about the German folk dance where we clap our hands in a rhythm we had to have 2 or 4 people for it to work  me and my partner we first slapped our legs then we touched our shoulders and claped our hands and the our we high fived each other with our right hands then our left hand then we high fived each other again but with both hand's and we kept on doing that we got use to it and we were able to do it with our eyes closed every one had to stand up and do it one by one our group went 2nd and after that we sat down and watched more people do there it was cool then we packed up and went home

emergen assembly

this term we started off the day with our team assembly we talked about the language week. Then we got into our bg lines and walked to assembly and sat down our theme for this year is life’s a stage. We are going to be dancing and doing drama but in the assembly mr somerville came in the hall with a motorbike it was cool we sang our is it kind is it true is it necessary. Then more teachers and teams did more plays and stuff it was cool there was a toy shop interview for our production last term there was transformers and teddy bear there was Woody from Toy story bo peep from Toy story and the shop owner then they danced off stage. There was a superhero and 2 people with masks i'm pretty sure it was expressing feelings in a show and our teachers did an island dance then did some use to be and are trending now

  

the reading game

we played a reading game where every time you die if you can guess if the sentence said some thing like. "the football player could throw a football over a mountain that's a metaphor because no one would be able to do that so its a metaphor if its something like " john could but he didn't like the idea" that a simile if something has as or like its a simile. it was fun the last level was the grim reaper.

microscope fun

today we played with microscopes and we looked thru them and had to draw what we saw and they also had labels mine was c10 fern i think it was flea blood i don't know but this is what i saw a drew it was fun and then there is different one's like grass hopper wings.

number 28

 2099 goldberg, there where 3 boys Jimmy, Gerald, Sneff they where the smartest kids to ever live they would act like them normal selves though. They act stupid but there really smart wierd funny and more but when they said they would get something done they would get it done like bulding an army of little robots that listen to there every comand but 2 weeks later they receved an email form the FBI and it said “this is a message to Sneff Gerald and Jimmy we need you to make us a giant robot we need it to go into sapce and make peace with the aliens we made angry. Something bad could happen so please make one” the 3 boys decided to make one but the FBI said robot not suit. It took them 3 months to build but they got it done they tried to turn it on but nothing happened and sneff thought he put the wires so he went and checked they were in the wrong places he put them in to the right place and then the robot turns on and sneff fell in a fright but he pulled some wires loose the robot twitched its eyes turned red and it blasted through the roof and went on a rampage sneff gerald and jimmy knew making that was a mistake it started to talk “my name is number 28 and i can't go down that easy so try me” then it went back to destroying the town everyone was screaming and running but then it rememberd who was its creator and then he saw them holding an emergency shut down button it ran all the way home (the garage) and nearly squeezing them stomped on the button and chased. Them they ran into a burger shop they hid behind the counter jimmy looked at gerald and gerald looked at  sneff he was eating a burger gerald smacked it out of his and and said “dude you gonna eat and a time like this” sneff grabbed another burger and with a mouth full of burger he mumbled “stress eating man it helps” they heard the robot it had used it’s shrinking mode and turned  small and it bursts through the door and the wires all come out and it shuts off the 3 boys shouted harry everyone was calling them heroes they buried the number 28 and they lived happily ever after

final writing

Explanation template

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	The reason we should and shouldn't bring back extinct animals
Introduction Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.	Would you bring back an extinct animal if you would what would you bring back?we should not bring back animals from a long time ago because they could hurt a lot of people and possibly make a lot of animals go extinct because of it.It could be a dinosaur. Like a triceratops it could kill a lot of animals if it feels threatened by humans too.
Information 1st element Idea 1	But some animals could be good to bring back because they maybe could help the environment or be really nice to humans  And probably not destroy humanity and we could be the first people to bring extinct animals back to life.
Information 2nd element Idea 2	If they got loose they could go to schools and destroy it and kill a lot of people they could do the same to company's and other places to and it could be really really bad it could destroy our world possibly.
Information 3rd element Idea 3	They could again get loose but go somewhere and we can't find it and then it could kill a whole spices and or more than 1 whole spices so it could be really really dangerous.
Information 4th element Idea 4	But if we did and they breaded with another spices for some reason they could make a new spices and then we would have more animals but scientist would have to
Conclusion There you have it - 4 reasons as to -why -that will help you -for you to try...