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Thursday 26 September 2019

the reading game


we played a reading game where every time you die if you can guess if the sentence said some thing like. "the football player could throw a football over a mountain that's a metaphor because no one would be able to do that so its a metaphor if its something like " john could but he didn't like the idea" that a simile if something has as or like its a simile. it was fun the last level was the grim reaper.

Wednesday 25 September 2019

microscope fun

today we played with microscopes and we looked thru them and had to draw what we saw and they also had labels mine was c10 fern i think it was flea blood i don't know but this is what i saw a drew it was fun and then there is different one's like grass hopper wings.

Monday 23 September 2019

number 28

 2099 goldberg, there where 3 boys Jimmy, Gerald, Sneff they where the smartest kids to ever live they would act like them normal selves though. They act stupid but there really smart wierd funny and more but when they said they would get something done they would get it done like bulding an army of little robots that listen to there every comand but 2 weeks later they receved an email form the FBI and it said “this is a message to Sneff Gerald and Jimmy we need you to make us a giant robot we need it to go into sapce and make peace with the aliens we made angry. Something bad could happen so please make one” the 3 boys decided to make one but the FBI said robot not suit. It took them 3 months to build but they got it done they tried to turn it on but nothing happened and sneff thought he put the wires so he went and checked they were in the wrong places he put them in to the right place and then the robot turns on and sneff fell in a fright but he pulled some wires loose the robot twitched its eyes turned red and it blasted through the roof and went on a rampage sneff gerald and jimmy knew making that was a mistake it started to talk “my name is number 28 and i can't go down that easy so try me” then it went back to destroying the town everyone was screaming and running but then it rememberd who was its creator and then he saw them holding an emergency shut down button it ran all the way home (the garage) and nearly squeezing them stomped on the button and chased. Them they ran into a burger shop they hid behind the counter jimmy looked at gerald and gerald looked at  sneff he was eating a burger gerald smacked it out of his and and said “dude you gonna eat and a time like this” sneff grabbed another burger and with a mouth full of burger he mumbled “stress eating man it helps” they heard the robot it had used it’s shrinking mode and turned  small and it bursts through the door and the wires all come out and it shuts off the 3 boys shouted harry everyone was calling them heroes they buried the number 28 and they lived happily ever after

Thursday 19 September 2019

final writing

Explanation template
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Title - What you will be explaining
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Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
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Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
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Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title
Be clever! Hook your reader
The reason we should and shouldn't bring back extinct animals
Introduction
Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.
Would you bring back an extinct animal if you would what would you bring back?we should not bring back animals from a long time ago because they could hurt a lot of people and possibly make a lot of animals go extinct because of it.It could be a dinosaur. Like a triceratops it could kill a lot of animals if it feels threatened by humans too.    
Information
1st element
Idea 1
But some animals could be good to bring back because they maybe could help the environment or be really nice to humans 
And probably not destroy humanity and we could be the first people to bring extinct animals back to life. 
Information
2nd element
Idea 2
If they got loose they could go to schools and destroy it and kill a lot of people they could do the same to company's and other places to and it could be really really bad it could destroy our world possibly.    
Information
3rd element
Idea 3
They could again get loose but go somewhere and we can't find it and then it could kill a whole spices and or more than 1 whole spices so it could be really really dangerous. 
Information
4th element
Idea 4
But if we did and they breaded with another spices for some reason they could make a new spices and then we would have more animals but scientist would have to 



Conclusion
There you have it - 4 reasons as to
-why
-that will help you
-for you to try...