Monday 11 November 2019
narrative writing plan
this week we had to do some narrative writing we had to do a brain storm then post it to our blog then we can do the real writing i have mine all planed out.
Wednesday 6 November 2019
choose it Narrative part one
one day under the flying car’s Gerald and his little brother James were going to the stores to get their parents bread milk and a drink. Gerald and James were walking down the road when James saw something shiny in the alleyway behind the fence james told gerald but he said “we’ll check if its still there when we get back” they bought the things and walked the same way “IT’S STILL THERE” james shouted he ran down the alleyway and jumped the fence “don’t do that again if i lose you mum & dad will kill me” Gearld said out of breath james was amazed “IT'S A STAR IT”S A STAR WE FOUND A STARRRRRRR. “Keep it down it's probably just plastic ” gerald touched it “OWW it just burnt me” gerald said. Then he said something and it really happened. “I wish this star wasn't so hot” james shouted “ i want to touch it” gerald said no but james didn't listen then he held it and he wasn't burning his hand.
They walked home after putting it in their bag, after getting home, they went home and went into the garage and pulled out the star Gerald wonders why it stop burning then james said “I wish we had a bag of chips and a big drink” it appeared then Gerald said “let's dig a hole and put it in the backyard it's bad wishing for things that we need but we cant let people know we have this as well, James didn't want to but then during the night Gerald snuck out and rode his bike far away and dug a hole then buried it the next morning came around and James was sad he didn't talk to anyone. Gerald went back to get the star but instead he found thousands of clouds going up he dug up the star and got it the clouds disappeared and he wished them back he got James and showed him the clouds. They climbed up the clouds james tried eating the clouds he couldn't but when they got near space they couldn't breath so gerald quiqly wished to be able to breathe any wear.
They walked home after putting it in their bag, after getting home, they went home and went into the garage and pulled out the star Gerald wonders why it stop burning then james said “I wish we had a bag of chips and a big drink” it appeared then Gerald said “let's dig a hole and put it in the backyard it's bad wishing for things that we need but we cant let people know we have this as well, James didn't want to but then during the night Gerald snuck out and rode his bike far away and dug a hole then buried it the next morning came around and James was sad he didn't talk to anyone. Gerald went back to get the star but instead he found thousands of clouds going up he dug up the star and got it the clouds disappeared and he wished them back he got James and showed him the clouds. They climbed up the clouds james tried eating the clouds he couldn't but when they got near space they couldn't breath so gerald quiqly wished to be able to breathe any wear.
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