Africa, Botswana, African Wild Dog

We have been learning about different animals we got to pick any animal we had to pick an endangered species my country was Botswana and my animal was the wild african dog there is only 6, 600 left in the world.

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there was once two boys named Logan and Jake they were really mean to everyone and did not like anyone they stole they bullied they even stole a purse and they are now sneaking onto a airplane and karma was waiting for the perfect time to strike and the plane crashed they were on a island they did not find anyone they yelled they searched but nothing they found a couple of crates and it had food and water in it. it could last them 5 or 6 months. They had to make there own shelter Logan made a little hut and Jake made a big hut so they slept in Jake’s hut for the night. the next morning they heard a laugh and “Logan… LOGAN” said Jake. Jake was scared then jake realized that logan was not next to him so jake peeked outside he was scared it was one of the 7 deadly sins it was envy and then he saw that monster staring right at him then it started running at him he closed the tent and he felt a bit of wetness crawl down his back he looked up and he saw greed above him greed ate Jake. Jake woke up from a horrible dream and screamed witch woke up Logan so logan knocked out jake so he could go back to sleep when jake woke up it was morning for real. he saw Logan cooking fish for breakfast “dude i made some spears and kife’s do you want some fish” said Logan




“Thanks for the weapons and for the fish” he caught a really really big snapper he made 2 knife’s and some spears he made 2 of each so they could protect themselves if there was animales, so they ate there fish and explored they got to a 2 way path it said the left was dangerous and the right was safe Jake wanted to stay safe and Logan wanted some action so Logan went left and Jake went right. When Jake got half way down he heard some noises and was very scared and he came across a beautiful lake and he saw a bunny rabbit he said

“hey buddy what are you doing out here”, then he ran because the rabbit was a monster it ate 3 whole trees and meanwhile Logan was trying to find monsters and dangerous things to fight but he didn't and sat on a rock waiting for something to happen but nothing so he got bored and they both went to back to the plane and jake was running and screaming and logan was walking bordley saw a communicator and it was still working. Logan called someone and said to them “hello.. Hello”




“Who are you and where are you” said the person on the other side of the communicator




“Where stuck on a island can you help us”




“Sure well try and track you down” then 3 hours later a plane came and saved them but then the same thing happened a bunch of time and when they finally got home after 2 months of it happening they got arrested for everything they done but the only thing they were happy about was 3 meals a day and a roof over their head but they were going to a high tech security prison that no one can get in or out . THE END

the plane Narrative

there was once two boys named Logan and Jake they were really mean to everyone and did not like anyone they stole they bullied they even stole a purse and they are now sneaking onto a airplane and karma was waiting for the perfect time to strike and the plane crashed they were on a island they did not find anyone they yelled they searched but nothing they found a couple of crates and it had food and water in it it could last them 5 or 6 months. They had to make there own shelter Logan made a little hut and Jake made a big hut so they slept in Jake’s hut for the night the next morning they heard a laugh and they were scared then jake realized that logan was not next to him so jake peeked outside he was scared it was one of the 7 deadly sins it was envy and then he saw that monster staring right at him then it started running at him he closed the tent and he felt a bit of wetness crawl down his back he looked up and he saw greed above him greed ate Jake. Jake woke up from a horrible dream and screamed witch woke up Logan so logan knocked out jake so he could go back to sleep when jake woke up it was morning for real. he saw Logan cooking fish for breakfast he caught a really really big snapper he made 2 knife and some spears he made 2 of each so they could protect themselves if there was animales, so they ate there fish and explored they got to a 2 way path it said the left was dangerous and the right was safe Jake wanted to stay safe and Logan wanted some action so Logan went to left and Jake went right. When Jake got half way down he heard some noises and was very scared and he came across a beautiful lake and he saw a bunny rabbit he said “hey buddy what are you doing out here then it and he ran because the rabbit was a monster it ate 3 whole trees and logan was bored so they both went to the plane and saw a communicator and it was still working they called someone and then 3 hours later a plane came and saved them but then the same thing happened a bunch of time and when they finally got home they got arrested for everything they done. THE END