the plane Narrative

there was once two boys named Logan and Jake they were really mean to everyone and did not like anyone they stole they bullied they even stole a purse and they are now sneaking onto a airplane and karma was waiting for the perfect time to strike and the plane crashed they were on a island they did not find anyone they yelled they searched but nothing they found a couple of crates and it had food and water in it it could last them 5 or 6 months. They had to make there own shelter Logan made a little hut and Jake made a big hut so they slept in Jake’s hut for the night the next morning they heard a laugh and they were scared then jake realized that logan was not next to him so jake peeked outside he was scared it was one of the 7 deadly sins it was envy and then he saw that monster staring right at him then it started running at him he closed the tent and he felt a bit of wetness crawl down his back he looked up and he saw greed above him greed ate Jake. Jake woke up from a horrible dream and screamed witch woke up Logan so logan knocked out jake so he could go back to sleep when jake woke up it was morning for real. he saw Logan cooking fish for breakfast he caught a really really big snapper he made 2 knife and some spears he made 2 of each so they could protect themselves if there was animales, so they ate there fish and explored they got to a 2 way path it said the left was dangerous and the right was safe Jake wanted to stay safe and Logan wanted some action so Logan went to left and Jake went right. When Jake got half way down he heard some noises and was very scared and he came across a beautiful lake and he saw a bunny rabbit he said “hey buddy what are you doing out here then it and he ran because the rabbit was a monster it ate 3 whole trees and logan was bored so they both went to the plane and saw a communicator and it was still working they called someone and then 3 hours later a plane came and saved them but then the same thing happened a bunch of time and when they finally got home they got arrested for everything they done. THE END