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today we made a persuasive advertisement we had to make a script rehearse our lines and then start filming but I didn't remember my lines so I said the first thing that came to mind it kind of turned out well .We went to the tables outside of room 3 and filmed our company name is chromephone it was one thing that came to my head and that was my company name. Then we had to edit it and add credits and music is was fun.have you bought products from advertisements?

Zebrafish

we learned about Zebrafish and how they have 70% of our DNA they use zebrafish for testing sometimes to see if they can heal humans because they have 70% of our genes so they use them to test if something can cure the human. and they have different stripes and they grow really really fast and there eggs are transparent too.They eat zooplankton, phytoplankton, insects insect larvae worms.

persuasive school hour writing

FIRSTLY: I think we should get a shorter day of school why you must ask yourself, we need to get more sleep so we focus better in class, so we don't miss any instructions and don’t fall asleep so if we get more sleep we focus don't fall asleep during class so we can get more work done and also get it posted on our blogs .




SECOND: if you wake up and try to find your uniform but someone moved it so you have to try and find it. You ask them and they don’t know where they put it then once you find you uniform you have to get changed get your lunch brush your teeth then get to school and then your late and get in trouble and probably get in trouble so then you got late because you couldn't find your uniform .





THIRD: if you have to do something for someone and it takes a while you could be late. It could be washing the dishes or taking your sibling to kindy and they could take forever to get ready then once you drop them off and get to school then your late and you get rethink or detention for being late cause what would happen if it happens to many times.





FOURTH: Your mum/dad could have to go to work and you have to drop your brother/sister off to kindy so you take a while to get to their kindy and when you do you realize the time and then you're late then you get in big trouble and you try to tell the teacher but they don't believe you so you get rethink and that goes on for awhile then you get detention then you get in trouble by your perants





CONCLUSION: So that's why i STRONGLY agree to why we all should have shorter school days instead of normal school days because you could get in trouble for the right reason sometimes or be late so everyone should have a shorter school day.

Persuasive advertisement

we watched ads that tried to get you to buy there products the clapper was he first one it was clap on and off lights and there was also the clapper plus witch you had a remote with it and it could stick to any surface and it could be use in 25 meters. the second ad was the shamWOW it could last ten years and also clean up anything really quickly it wipes it in a mear insistent there's 2 for the bathroom and 2 for the kitchen.the 3rd one is promoting miter 10 and miter 10 mega for people who like to build with tools obviusly. and last but not least mr frost, i think this ad was promoting icecream and it was made in new zeland it also had od in it. Would you buy eany of these products?

shorter school day persuasion map

this is my persuasion map we had to wright 3 reasons why we should have a shorter school day and you were either for or against i was for it and here are my main reasons why i think we should all have a shorter school day.Are you for or against?