persuasive school hour writing

FIRSTLY: I think we should get a shorter day of school why you must ask yourself, we need to get more sleep so we focus better in class, so we don't miss any instructions and don’t fall asleep so if we get more sleep we focus don't fall asleep during class so we can get more work done and also get it posted on our blogs .




SECOND: if you wake up and try to find your uniform but someone moved it so you have to try and find it. You ask them and they don’t know where they put it then once you find you uniform you have to get changed get your lunch brush your teeth then get to school and then your late and get in trouble and probably get in trouble so then you got late because you couldn't find your uniform .





THIRD: if you have to do something for someone and it takes a while you could be late. It could be washing the dishes or taking your sibling to kindy and they could take forever to get ready then once you drop them off and get to school then your late and you get rethink or detention for being late cause what would happen if it happens to many times.





FOURTH: Your mum/dad could have to go to work and you have to drop your brother/sister off to kindy so you take a while to get to their kindy and when you do you realize the time and then you're late then you get in big trouble and you try to tell the teacher but they don't believe you so you get rethink and that goes on for awhile then you get detention then you get in trouble by your perants





CONCLUSION: So that's why i STRONGLY agree to why we all should have shorter school days instead of normal school days because you could get in trouble for the right reason sometimes or be late so everyone should have a shorter school day.