dont let go narrative

this week

 we had to wright a narrative about this picture and i havent gotten to the good parts yet

i hope you enjoy my story.

 

There was once a group of three kids who lived in the town ewufu it was a weird name and a small town so everyone knew each other. Any ways on with the story the three  boys would hang out together after and during school. They were the supposed nerds of the school they would get bullied but no matter what they would always stick together .Their names were Damien Hunter Reece and they built a tree fort in the middle of the woods. Damien got bored of only Reece Hunter so he said “we need a girl in the friend group”

Hunter responded “while no one wants to hang out with us so who do you have in mind”

Reece said “ OOOOOOO I THINK DAMIEN LIKES SOME ONE”

Damien responded “shut up”

Stuttering Hunter told them to stop, then Damien went to get some food and drinks from the shop so they could watch stranger things all night and Reece had a sugar rush and passed out, hunter stayed awake and watched movies Damien heard something outside, hunter had a butterfly knife and flipped it open in one swift motion Hunter jumped out of the tree house and screamed like a madman“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH”. 

Jumping and turning to be aware of his surroundings Damien shook his head exhaling Damien jumped out and said to get the flashlight but hunter said “Why did you not get it” 

Damien didn't want to so he told Hunter to get it and hunter finally agreed and when he got it Damien screamed. Hunter turned the flashlight on and jumped out. He called for Damien but there was no response he heard something behind him he turned around “BOO”. 

Hunter jumped back in fear Damien laughing so hard he cried Damien fell back in laughter Hunter said “very funny” 

While brushing himself off but then they heard something Damien said “i know you got Reece to run around in the bushes” Damien looked in the tree house and saw Reece and he climbed up the ladder and locked the door the bushes had faster movement and hunter climbed the ladder and went on the roof of the tree house and entered the hatchet they made and then he slapped Damien. He forgot about the entry on the roof they stayed there till dawn they had 4 beds and even knew they were just a group of 3 there was a knock…. TO BE CONTINUED 

the young detective

Task description
this week we wrote a narrative it was about a young detective looking for a key and he got it as a gift and he needs to find it and after we wrote our story we peer edited it on Thursday we shared our story with someone and they reviewed it and commented what was wrong.




Young Detective

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It had been three days since it had gone missing. One minute he had held it in his hand, the next it had vanished. How could it just have disappeared? It had been right in front of his eyes!

He had been warned about what would happen if he lost it. His mission had been to guard the key with his life, ever since they visited him last summer.

Adam had always had a detective’s instinct. They had told him as much. He had been chosen because he had certain skills, and he would need them more than ever now.

Only one clue had seemingly been left, which was sat on the living room table.

Holding the magnifying glass up to his eye, Adam began to investigate… he found himself in his dad’s room searching up and down side to side but nothing. He checked the toilet he found some hand or foot prints he couldn't identify. But it wasn't eany normal prints. His dad had a vent above his cupboard in his bathroom. It was big. He had to analyse it very well. It had some hair and Adam left it as a clue and took the piece of hair. He investigated the library his dad was reading his favourite book in “are you ok you look like you lost something”

 adams dad said “have you seen anything weird around here” 

Adam asked dad he replied “no” 

Dad had to leave for shopping. Adam was alone, the clue on the table he left to investigate a little more he went into the kitchen and found nothing. The lights dimmed a little bit and the house shook a little and Adam was very suspicious. He went into the power room and took a flashlight. It was pitch black, silence dripping water, a power box buzzing and a big room. The power room had the power box in it, some pipes and a lot of boxes. Adam went into the middle of the room there was a opening in the roof a big one Adam decided to climb into it he was crawling through the vents coughing and going blind from all the dust from his every move he found his way out so he could get a mask. He climbed down the ladder and heard something in the mountain of boxes he grabbed his X Ray vision goggles and searched. He looked very cautiously. “Whos there”

“Your worst nightmare” 

A demonic voice said “I know what you're looking for and to find it you have to look in the right places in the right time or you will not earn what you desire”

Adam ran up the stairs and shut the door. He went into the vent in his dads room with a mask and a flashlight. He shut the vent behind him.

to be continued.

visual mihi

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narrative writing plan

this week we had to do some narrative writing we had to do a brain storm then post it to our blog then we can do the real writing i have mine all planed out.

choose it Narrative part one

one day under the flying car’s Gerald and his little brother James were going to the stores to get their parents bread milk and a drink. Gerald and James were walking down the road when James saw something shiny in the alleyway behind the fence james told gerald but he said “we’ll check if its still there when we get back” they bought the things and walked the same way “IT’S STILL THERE” james shouted he ran down the alleyway and jumped the fence “don’t do that again if i lose you mum & dad will kill me” Gearld said out of breath james was amazed “IT'S A STAR IT”S A STAR WE FOUND A STARRRRRRR. “Keep it down it's probably just plastic ” gerald touched it “OWW it just burnt me” gerald said. Then he said something and it really happened. “I wish this star wasn't so hot” james shouted “ i want to touch it” gerald said no but james didn't listen then he held it and he wasn't burning his hand.

They walked home after putting it in their bag, after getting home, they went home and went into the garage and pulled out the star Gerald wonders why it stop burning then james said “I wish we had a bag of chips and a big drink” it appeared then Gerald said “let's dig a hole and put it in the backyard it's bad wishing for things that we need but we cant let people know we have this as well, James didn't want to but then during the night Gerald snuck out and rode his bike far away and dug a hole then buried it the next morning came around and James was sad he didn't talk to anyone. Gerald went back to get the star but instead he found thousands of clouds going up he dug up the star and got it the clouds disappeared and he wished them back he got James and showed him the clouds. They climbed up the clouds james tried eating the clouds he couldn't but when they got near space they couldn't breath so gerald quiqly wished to be able to breathe any wear. 

German folk dancing

most days after lunch we go to different room to learn new cutler dance's  in room 1 we learned about the German folk dance where we clap our hands in a rhythm we had to have 2 or 4 people for it to work  me and my partner we first slapped our legs then we touched our shoulders and claped our hands and the our we high fived each other with our right hands then our left hand then we high fived each other again but with both hand's and we kept on doing that we got use to it and we were able to do it with our eyes closed every one had to stand up and do it one by one our group went 2nd and after that we sat down and watched more people do there it was cool then we packed up and went home

emergen assembly

this term we started off the day with our team assembly we talked about the language week. Then we got into our bg lines and walked to assembly and sat down our theme for this year is life’s a stage. We are going to be dancing and doing drama but in the assembly mr somerville came in the hall with a motorbike it was cool we sang our is it kind is it true is it necessary. Then more teachers and teams did more plays and stuff it was cool there was a toy shop interview for our production last term there was transformers and teddy bear there was Woody from Toy story bo peep from Toy story and the shop owner then they danced off stage. There was a superhero and 2 people with masks i'm pretty sure it was expressing feelings in a show and our teachers did an island dance then did some use to be and are trending now