stardom writing

last Thursday we went on to a bus to stardom. it took for long to get to stardom but i wanted to stay in the bus it was warm when we go   out we had to  wait 10 minute$ until seven o’clock and then one of the teachers went in and came out and told us we can go in. we went in I give it a 5/10 because there wasn't much fun stuff but we had to do this thing as a team we had to find out stuff about planets.  we had score ratings I didn't  know and i dont'e no how much we got but after that we sat down and then the man that got us to do told us to

Go into a theater and look up the seats where there was this colourful thing changing colour and then this movie started we had seen the trailer at school before it was a cool movie then the man gave us all  a free ticket to stardom and then we had got back from stardom it was

Lunch time then after it ended we had our program it is cool and then we got back at  2:56 and then 4 minute$ later it was home time He told us that the moon is bigger than Australia