narrative writing plan

this week we had to do some narrative writing we had to do a brain storm then post it to our blog then we can do the real writing i have mine all planed out.

choose it Narrative part one

one day under the flying car’s Gerald and his little brother James were going to the stores to get their parents bread milk and a drink. Gerald and James were walking down the road when James saw something shiny in the alleyway behind the fence james told gerald but he said “we’ll check if its still there when we get back” they bought the things and walked the same way “IT’S STILL THERE” james shouted he ran down the alleyway and jumped the fence “don’t do that again if i lose you mum & dad will kill me” Gearld said out of breath james was amazed “IT'S A STAR IT”S A STAR WE FOUND A STARRRRRRR. “Keep it down it's probably just plastic ” gerald touched it “OWW it just burnt me” gerald said. Then he said something and it really happened. “I wish this star wasn't so hot” james shouted “ i want to touch it” gerald said no but james didn't listen then he held it and he wasn't burning his hand.

They walked home after putting it in their bag, after getting home, they went home and went into the garage and pulled out the star Gerald wonders why it stop burning then james said “I wish we had a bag of chips and a big drink” it appeared then Gerald said “let's dig a hole and put it in the backyard it's bad wishing for things that we need but we cant let people know we have this as well, James didn't want to but then during the night Gerald snuck out and rode his bike far away and dug a hole then buried it the next morning came around and James was sad he didn't talk to anyone. Gerald went back to get the star but instead he found thousands of clouds going up he dug up the star and got it the clouds disappeared and he wished them back he got James and showed him the clouds. They climbed up the clouds james tried eating the clouds he couldn't but when they got near space they couldn't breath so gerald quiqly wished to be able to breathe any wear. 

German folk dancing

most days after lunch we go to different room to learn new cutler dance's  in room 1 we learned about the German folk dance where we clap our hands in a rhythm we had to have 2 or 4 people for it to work  me and my partner we first slapped our legs then we touched our shoulders and claped our hands and the our we high fived each other with our right hands then our left hand then we high fived each other again but with both hand's and we kept on doing that we got use to it and we were able to do it with our eyes closed every one had to stand up and do it one by one our group went 2nd and after that we sat down and watched more people do there it was cool then we packed up and went home

emergen assembly

this term we started off the day with our team assembly we talked about the language week. Then we got into our bg lines and walked to assembly and sat down our theme for this year is life’s a stage. We are going to be dancing and doing drama but in the assembly mr somerville came in the hall with a motorbike it was cool we sang our is it kind is it true is it necessary. Then more teachers and teams did more plays and stuff it was cool there was a toy shop interview for our production last term there was transformers and teddy bear there was Woody from Toy story bo peep from Toy story and the shop owner then they danced off stage. There was a superhero and 2 people with masks i'm pretty sure it was expressing feelings in a show and our teachers did an island dance then did some use to be and are trending now

  

the reading game

we played a reading game where every time you die if you can guess if the sentence said some thing like. "the football player could throw a football over a mountain that's a metaphor because no one would be able to do that so its a metaphor if its something like " john could but he didn't like the idea" that a simile if something has as or like its a simile. it was fun the last level was the grim reaper.

microscope fun

today we played with microscopes and we looked thru them and had to draw what we saw and they also had labels mine was c10 fern i think it was flea blood i don't know but this is what i saw a drew it was fun and then there is different one's like grass hopper wings.

number 28

 2099 goldberg, there where 3 boys Jimmy, Gerald, Sneff they where the smartest kids to ever live they would act like them normal selves though. They act stupid but there really smart wierd funny and more but when they said they would get something done they would get it done like bulding an army of little robots that listen to there every comand but 2 weeks later they receved an email form the FBI and it said “this is a message to Sneff Gerald and Jimmy we need you to make us a giant robot we need it to go into sapce and make peace with the aliens we made angry. Something bad could happen so please make one” the 3 boys decided to make one but the FBI said robot not suit. It took them 3 months to build but they got it done they tried to turn it on but nothing happened and sneff thought he put the wires so he went and checked they were in the wrong places he put them in to the right place and then the robot turns on and sneff fell in a fright but he pulled some wires loose the robot twitched its eyes turned red and it blasted through the roof and went on a rampage sneff gerald and jimmy knew making that was a mistake it started to talk “my name is number 28 and i can't go down that easy so try me” then it went back to destroying the town everyone was screaming and running but then it rememberd who was its creator and then he saw them holding an emergency shut down button it ran all the way home (the garage) and nearly squeezing them stomped on the button and chased. Them they ran into a burger shop they hid behind the counter jimmy looked at gerald and gerald looked at  sneff he was eating a burger gerald smacked it out of his and and said “dude you gonna eat and a time like this” sneff grabbed another burger and with a mouth full of burger he mumbled “stress eating man it helps” they heard the robot it had used it’s shrinking mode and turned  small and it bursts through the door and the wires all come out and it shuts off the 3 boys shouted harry everyone was calling them heroes they buried the number 28 and they lived happily ever after

final writing

Explanation template

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	The reason we should and shouldn't bring back extinct animals
Introduction Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.	Would you bring back an extinct animal if you would what would you bring back?we should not bring back animals from a long time ago because they could hurt a lot of people and possibly make a lot of animals go extinct because of it.It could be a dinosaur. Like a triceratops it could kill a lot of animals if it feels threatened by humans too.
Information 1st element Idea 1	But some animals could be good to bring back because they maybe could help the environment or be really nice to humans  And probably not destroy humanity and we could be the first people to bring extinct animals back to life.
Information 2nd element Idea 2	If they got loose they could go to schools and destroy it and kill a lot of people they could do the same to company's and other places to and it could be really really bad it could destroy our world possibly.
Information 3rd element Idea 3	They could again get loose but go somewhere and we can't find it and then it could kill a whole spices and or more than 1 whole spices so it could be really really dangerous.
Information 4th element Idea 4	But if we did and they breaded with another spices for some reason they could make a new spices and then we would have more animals but scientist would have to
Conclusion There you have it - 4 reasons as to -why -that will help you -for you to try...

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today we made a persuasive advertisement we had to make a script rehearse our lines and then start filming but I didn't remember my lines so I said the first thing that came to mind it kind of turned out well .We went to the tables outside of room 3 and filmed our company name is chromephone it was one thing that came to my head and that was my company name. Then we had to edit it and add credits and music is was fun.have you bought products from advertisements?

Zebrafish

we learned about Zebrafish and how they have 70% of our DNA they use zebrafish for testing sometimes to see if they can heal humans because they have 70% of our genes so they use them to test if something can cure the human. and they have different stripes and they grow really really fast and there eggs are transparent too.They eat zooplankton, phytoplankton, insects insect larvae worms.

persuasive school hour writing

FIRSTLY: I think we should get a shorter day of school why you must ask yourself, we need to get more sleep so we focus better in class, so we don't miss any instructions and don’t fall asleep so if we get more sleep we focus don't fall asleep during class so we can get more work done and also get it posted on our blogs .




SECOND: if you wake up and try to find your uniform but someone moved it so you have to try and find it. You ask them and they don’t know where they put it then once you find you uniform you have to get changed get your lunch brush your teeth then get to school and then your late and get in trouble and probably get in trouble so then you got late because you couldn't find your uniform .





THIRD: if you have to do something for someone and it takes a while you could be late. It could be washing the dishes or taking your sibling to kindy and they could take forever to get ready then once you drop them off and get to school then your late and you get rethink or detention for being late cause what would happen if it happens to many times.





FOURTH: Your mum/dad could have to go to work and you have to drop your brother/sister off to kindy so you take a while to get to their kindy and when you do you realize the time and then you're late then you get in big trouble and you try to tell the teacher but they don't believe you so you get rethink and that goes on for awhile then you get detention then you get in trouble by your perants





CONCLUSION: So that's why i STRONGLY agree to why we all should have shorter school days instead of normal school days because you could get in trouble for the right reason sometimes or be late so everyone should have a shorter school day.

Persuasive advertisement

we watched ads that tried to get you to buy there products the clapper was he first one it was clap on and off lights and there was also the clapper plus witch you had a remote with it and it could stick to any surface and it could be use in 25 meters. the second ad was the shamWOW it could last ten years and also clean up anything really quickly it wipes it in a mear insistent there's 2 for the bathroom and 2 for the kitchen.the 3rd one is promoting miter 10 and miter 10 mega for people who like to build with tools obviusly. and last but not least mr frost, i think this ad was promoting icecream and it was made in new zeland it also had od in it. Would you buy eany of these products?

shorter school day persuasion map

this is my persuasion map we had to wright 3 reasons why we should have a shorter school day and you were either for or against i was for it and here are my main reasons why i think we should all have a shorter school day.Are you for or against?

My prior knowledge of persuasive writing

we had to wright a list of things persuasive means then we done our wordel we copied and pasted it onto the start then we pressed create then did a bit of editing like colour and the way it looks then we had to post it on our blogs  and wright sentences underneath like right now

Blog Anylisis

i have wrote stuff about my blog Analysis which is showing what iv posted in the past and when i started  posting and years and months from 2014 to 2019 this has all the information the past from my blog 

Australia

Australia

Wildlife

In Australia the wild life is cool but it’s quite hot there, I go there to visit my dad but any way. Some of the lizards are quite small but some are big, there was this one time we came back from the pool’s and there was a giant lizard above the door my aunty said to ignore it. On our way in it hissed at me and my cousin ran in and my aunty was laughing at us and my cousin started laughing too, what's the biggest wildlife you've encountered.





Food’s

In Australia they have some different stuff to New Zealand. Sometimes for dinner we would have KFC sometimes my nana would make us some noodles or prawns or taro or maybe both it was the best and when my nana went to the doctors we would get subway for lunch and wait in the car.And one time in the morning me and my cousin where home alone because my dad and nana and aunty went to the red bank plaza for some stuff, they asked us if we wanted to come we said “no” and when they came back they got us pancakes from Mcdonalds, what's your favorite food.





Places

There is a plaza in Australia called the red bank plaza, its really cool it has 3 floors, once on the ground level there where these things that were hanging and spinning around it looked really cool. When they were in a certain position it would form a picture.There was this other time when me and my cousin went to watch trolls at the movies, when we got to the counter we bought our tickets and when we went to get them stamped the guy who stamped them had an earring that made a big hole in his ear but he was nice, then before we got into the movie my cousin needed to go to the toilet and he took a while then we got to the movie. Me and my cousin got to the red bank plaza and we had money for the arcade me and my cousin went to the claw machine it was rigged and my cousin doubted me and i got a frog in a magician hat my cousin said “nice” then after a while we were done and my aunty said to just wait at the bus stop when where done. we found a trolli so we started jumping in it and pushing each other down the hill i nearly made my cousin hit the lamp lucky i stopped it before it did he laughed my aunty picked us and we went home. What's the best prize you've gotten before






Family



The best thing about going to Australia is seeing my family when I get to the airport the employee takes us around to try and find the people who pick us up when my dad picks me up we normally go to his wife's house or my nana's house and I also get to see my little brothers it’s really cool i like seeing my nana and my aunt and uncles and one of my favorite cousins he is really cool we normally play wrestling and stuff it's really fun sometimes when there's nothing to do my dad normally takes me and my brothers or me and my cousin out we would do something like go to the park or my dad would give us money and drop us off at the plaza and say what time he would be back and me and my cousin would just be us and do some stuff. What's your favourite country or continent

dimic quistion

today we had maths dimic we had to get in to groups that the teacher put us in. I the group was me Davonte Hopa and Filipe the name of the quistion was lolis lolis lolis. And we figured out the question it was pretty fun.

Africa & Botswana

  Africa:Botswana

africa has lots of animals. But some of them are endangered it is sad because the animals could go extinct and people kill elephants for their tusks. now some of them are born without tusks so people cant kill them because they have no tusks they wanted for the tusks for ivory. \Ivory i think is rare and can get you a lot of money if you sell it.

                                         2nd largest

Africa is the 2nd largest continent it covers 6% of the earth's surface area and it is also the 2nd most popular continent it covers 20% of earth's land area 

                                       food’s

 some of the foods they eat is morogo like most people they eat porridge as well they also eat stew and vetkoek it kinda looks like a weird burger but it can be made with lots of mince or syrup honey or jam wait there's more, they also eat seswaa

      

                                  Currency

7.14 botswana pula is the same amount of money which is $1.00 in New Zealand. $20.64 is 147.20 in botswana pula and $500.0 is 3565.90 in botswana pula there money will always be ahead of what we have

                                    Sports

The most popular sport in Botswana is football, other sports they play are cricket, tennis, softball, badminton, golf and last of all track and field the reason Botswana likes football so much is because the british influence       

Africa, Botswana, African Wild Dog

We have been learning about different animals we got to pick any animal we had to pick an endangered species my country was Botswana and my animal was the wild african dog there is only 6, 600 left in the world.

choose it draft 2

there was once two boys named Logan and Jake they were really mean to everyone and did not like anyone they stole they bullied they even stole a purse and they are now sneaking onto a airplane and karma was waiting for the perfect time to strike and the plane crashed they were on a island they did not find anyone they yelled they searched but nothing they found a couple of crates and it had food and water in it. it could last them 5 or 6 months. They had to make there own shelter Logan made a little hut and Jake made a big hut so they slept in Jake’s hut for the night. the next morning they heard a laugh and “Logan… LOGAN” said Jake. Jake was scared then jake realized that logan was not next to him so jake peeked outside he was scared it was one of the 7 deadly sins it was envy and then he saw that monster staring right at him then it started running at him he closed the tent and he felt a bit of wetness crawl down his back he looked up and he saw greed above him greed ate Jake. Jake woke up from a horrible dream and screamed witch woke up Logan so logan knocked out jake so he could go back to sleep when jake woke up it was morning for real. he saw Logan cooking fish for breakfast “dude i made some spears and kife’s do you want some fish” said Logan




“Thanks for the weapons and for the fish” he caught a really really big snapper he made 2 knife’s and some spears he made 2 of each so they could protect themselves if there was animales, so they ate there fish and explored they got to a 2 way path it said the left was dangerous and the right was safe Jake wanted to stay safe and Logan wanted some action so Logan went left and Jake went right. When Jake got half way down he heard some noises and was very scared and he came across a beautiful lake and he saw a bunny rabbit he said

“hey buddy what are you doing out here”, then he ran because the rabbit was a monster it ate 3 whole trees and meanwhile Logan was trying to find monsters and dangerous things to fight but he didn't and sat on a rock waiting for something to happen but nothing so he got bored and they both went to back to the plane and jake was running and screaming and logan was walking bordley saw a communicator and it was still working. Logan called someone and said to them “hello.. Hello”




“Who are you and where are you” said the person on the other side of the communicator




“Where stuck on a island can you help us”




“Sure well try and track you down” then 3 hours later a plane came and saved them but then the same thing happened a bunch of time and when they finally got home after 2 months of it happening they got arrested for everything they done but the only thing they were happy about was 3 meals a day and a roof over their head but they were going to a high tech security prison that no one can get in or out . THE END

the plane Narrative

there was once two boys named Logan and Jake they were really mean to everyone and did not like anyone they stole they bullied they even stole a purse and they are now sneaking onto a airplane and karma was waiting for the perfect time to strike and the plane crashed they were on a island they did not find anyone they yelled they searched but nothing they found a couple of crates and it had food and water in it it could last them 5 or 6 months. They had to make there own shelter Logan made a little hut and Jake made a big hut so they slept in Jake’s hut for the night the next morning they heard a laugh and they were scared then jake realized that logan was not next to him so jake peeked outside he was scared it was one of the 7 deadly sins it was envy and then he saw that monster staring right at him then it started running at him he closed the tent and he felt a bit of wetness crawl down his back he looked up and he saw greed above him greed ate Jake. Jake woke up from a horrible dream and screamed witch woke up Logan so logan knocked out jake so he could go back to sleep when jake woke up it was morning for real. he saw Logan cooking fish for breakfast he caught a really really big snapper he made 2 knife and some spears he made 2 of each so they could protect themselves if there was animales, so they ate there fish and explored they got to a 2 way path it said the left was dangerous and the right was safe Jake wanted to stay safe and Logan wanted some action so Logan went to left and Jake went right. When Jake got half way down he heard some noises and was very scared and he came across a beautiful lake and he saw a bunny rabbit he said “hey buddy what are you doing out here then it and he ran because the rabbit was a monster it ate 3 whole trees and logan was bored so they both went to the plane and saw a communicator and it was still working they called someone and then 3 hours later a plane came and saved them but then the same thing happened a bunch of time and when they finally got home they got arrested for everything they done. THE END       

carrea chat

today we had 3 people came in to talk to us  about them and there career there was Jason young  phiona and tanielu talea they told us about how they got to where they are now and how they got there.we all asked some questions some where funny some where good ok and silly. one of the tips where that always try different things and not always do one thing always try your best

te tiriti o waitangi

attitude talk:friendship factor

Today after morning tea we went to the street and we sat down with a woman named Jannah who came and talked about friendship. 

She told us about #3 types of friendships
girl-girl friendship
guy-guy friendships and the final one
girl guy friendships. Jannah said that the girls and the guys can learn something from each other girls student take their friendship to seriously and boys need to talk more.she told us six tips to get friends
1 be friendly
2 remember their names
3 learn to listen
4 be positive
5 remember special times
6 the one that i thinks the best be yourself you should always be yourself and never change.

Things not to do 1:not to do back stab 2:smother 3:showing off 4:mean humor 5:the worst bullying. thats how you could possibly lose friends or not make any at all.

i thought the talk was good because it tells you how you can make friends how to be kind and what to not do to people it was a good talk you could make more friends by using these tips.

homemade brownie in a cup

this is a picture f a brownie in a cup heres how i made it.

2 tablespoons of melted butter, 2 tablespoons of milk, 1/2 a teaspoon of vanilla extract, a pinch of salt, 2 tablespoons of flour (plain), 2 tablespoons of cocoa powder, 2 tablespoons of sugar (brown), chocolate chips / any other additions. and stir nicely and put it in the microwave for 1 minute and pull it out and put toppings on if you want to and enjoy 😉

my cats

these are my cats the one on the top left Corner is Buster he is very very lovey but he can also be a grumpy old man but still lovey. The one under him is Piper he is weird lovey, him and buster are like brothers. The one on my brothers back that is kirin when ever we get boxes we put them on the ground for the cats thers one box that kirin and Akira fight over (Akiras the next cat) its like seeing 2 small creatures fight but in there world there big cat men they are funny. Akira is a bit of an egg but hes cool tho if hes laying down and hes bored he will attack your feet when you come past Akira and kirin are Actually brothers Akira is very mischief he has ran out the gate before and  he came back he really likes to sit in my mums basket full of towels so dose Kirin. Kirin and akira are really protective of that box.
  they may be weirdos but there our weirdos. together they make akusipin

mixture of problems

test parctise

free writing with Mr Wiseman

This one time there was a burrito named Burn he lived in mexico he was made perfectly and he came alive and every one in mixaco kew Burn. One day burn went missing he left a note in his house it said “I am going to travel the world- Burn” everyone freaked out they called a detective meanwhile burn is in antarctica burn and makes a fire with his very very very hot ghost peppers. He said he would continue in the morning but in mexico the detective was sick and every one was sad because burn was gone they went to go find him themselves burn was now in hawaii and was having lots of fun while everyone else was on the lookout for burn they made it to antartica. They saw some of Burns ghost peppers and one of them said let's split up.

They all split up and went to different places 6 people went to New york another 6 people went to Japan and the last 6 people went to dead man's mountain dead man's mountain is a place where ghost roam around. Burn went back to mexico to find no one there he was scared because he watches lots of scary movies he’s not scared of the dark he's scared of what hides in it. He went to the place he loves to eat the most the el nacho stand he went and he found Kenedy the guy who runs it Kenedy was really happy to see Burn Kennedy made some nachos for Burn. “Where have you been Burn everyone's looking for you” Kennedy said “I've been traveling the world” Burn said everyone came back and saw Burn the all cheered with happiness and then Burn told them when he was going somewhere and where. THE END 

my visual mihi

hi my name is lennox and this is my visual mihi that's me drawn in the middle on the top left Conner if a ginger cat dabbing and the word family because I love my family the cat is like one of our cats named akira .On the bottom of that is 3 sushi's sleeping my favorite food is sushi that is why i drew it.Next to that is Matt stonie he is my favorite YouTuber because he eats food as fast as he can and he enters eating contest and it makes me hungry.On the top is the New zeland flag i use to think New Zealand was called old zeland.